I really have to say, I envy you for RPing on a forum where English is not your first language. I think this is really good practice for you to get better at it. I will be more than happy to help if you have any questions. I don't want to nitpick every comment and/or post you make where the language is kind of off because that just takes the fun out of the game. I'm on AIM or MSN almost everyday so feel free to message me whenever if you want to chat or have questions. :)

As for Hakuba's characterization- I think he's good. There's nothing I see that is out of character for him. I really look forward to interacting with him more.